Peer Response Summary

Writer's name: Karla Flores

Respondant's name: Ruchin Srisothorwongse
Kwang Shin

1. What global features did your colleagues like most about your work?

• intro to all the points in my intro
• evidence (michael jordan etc.)
• more evidence/ on how men are with friends as well as women. give examples
• research on women/men sports (ex: olympic games)
• reference page, when some men are stronger it is true. (extreme sports)

2. After analyzing your colleagues' feedback in terms of your purposes as a write, what do you plan to change when you revise your work? (be sure to focus on global issues here.)

• I plan to add more examples and research some stereotypes through the internet, etc.