Writer's name: Karla Flores
Respondant's name: Ruchin Srisothorwongse
Kwang Shin
1. What global features did your colleagues like most about your work?
- intro to all the points in my intro
- evidence (michael jordan etc.)
- more evidence/ on how men are with friends as well as women. give examples
- research on women/men sports (ex: olympic games)
- reference page, when some men are stronger it is true. (extreme sports)
2. After analyzing your colleagues' feedback in terms of your purposes as a write, what do you plan to change when you revise your work? (be sure to focus on global issues here.)
- I plan to add more examples and research some stereotypes through the internet, etc.
